Please tell me what you think, any ideas, changes, and please proof read for me.

Business Card

I like it. Makes me wanna call you!

Well that's good I think that's what I want LOL, so you think it's okay that it doesn't have a pic of a horse on it, I kinda like it it's relaxing to look at don't you think?

Very. Can I take a nap under your tree? I like it too. I could also see putting a horse in there if you wanted to.

I like it too!! LOFF the colors, eye catching!
Do I get one when I see you at the show this weeknd??

Well I designed it on a online bus card place and they didn't have any good horse pics, the one site that had some I REALLY liked were kinda expensive for me and this one is cheap, so you think it'll be okay? Do you see any typos? I guess it's kinda hard to see?

I'll be the odd duck out... I think the text gets lost on the background...

HUH what when where? SHOW?? What show?

I haven't ordered it yet, I just made it online and that's my proof, but I think I might order them?

Yes I see what you mean but I think it'll be fine once it's in print? Maybe?

On further examination I gotta agree - it's definitely legible but you may want to make the text stand out a bit more. And if you plan to post it in tack shops, etc., possibly make it more immediately obvious that it's for something horsey. I don't see any typos as long as you spelled your name correctly!

See why I don't generally critique? I'm wishy-washy!

I make my living doing graphic design, and I think it just doesn't look like it has any attention grabbing aspect to it, I think printed out, the text is too small and light to really show clearly... if you leave them at a tack store bulletin board, it wouldn't jump out at you...

LOL!!! At Monroe, the one you emailed me about. I have Sunday off, remember? You are showing Chance in 4' jumpers?? Actually, I am going to watch!!

4' jumpers, huh? That falls into my "to be watched and not tried" category!

Mostly it'll be going w/ a friend of mine who trains dogs and some clients have horse so she'd be giving them out to them? The web site says it'll be clearer when printed? I'm not sure if I can change the font? Well I think I can I'll see if I can make it a tad bigger.

OH so I should have YOU design me business cards huh huh huh? hmmmm well not sure what to do?